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This page was actually begun before the first one. I had actually intended to do something like this when I had originally done the comic, but I never considered a 2-page panel and the horizontal orientation just didn’t fit to a single page. I have been working on this for at LEAST a few hours everyday for about 4 days. As a result, its not nearly as good as it should be. In the end I just totally rushed it, because quantity over quality is something I need to practice more. I fully intend to try to get the first chapter wrapped up by the end of June. I can’t afford to spend any more time on these two pages.
Things I like:
Not much.... I actually like her pose (I know, at least SOMEONE is going to say ‘her legs are too thick’, but I draw them like that on purpose ;
I tried to force more linear weight into the figure like Nicole suggested, and I think it worked out ok. I left no border on purpose to give it a more “open” feeling. I hope :3
Things I don’t like:
Actually a lot of things. Mostly when I look at it I just feel like I could have spent a lot longer on each detail. It feels kind of bare... for how much time I put into it. But hopefully some tones will snaz it up (like I’m going to add a sky.) Haha I think I did a terrible edit of the cut in the page (yes, this WAS drawn on two separate pages... gosh, that was probably more trouble then it was worth)
[edit:] I hope this is the first and last edit for this page. Mostly just added the sloppy tones (I know, but I spent WAY too long on these pages already I NEED to move on) and some text. The text was a dilemma because I wanted it to make sense and be clear, but also spark interest. Most importantly, I wanted it to act as an intro for not just the 'first few chapters' but also the overall scheme of the comic itself. Unfortunately, you won't be hearing too much about the project itself our find out who Audrey is for a long time... The project should be explained a LITTLE in scene 03 I think, but I'm not sure how much I want to reveal so early on :3
Things I like:
Not much.... I actually like her pose (I know, at least SOMEONE is going to say ‘her legs are too thick’, but I draw them like that on purpose ;
I tried to force more linear weight into the figure like Nicole suggested, and I think it worked out ok. I left no border on purpose to give it a more “open” feeling. I hope :3Things I don’t like:
Actually a lot of things. Mostly when I look at it I just feel like I could have spent a lot longer on each detail. It feels kind of bare... for how much time I put into it. But hopefully some tones will snaz it up (like I’m going to add a sky.) Haha I think I did a terrible edit of the cut in the page (yes, this WAS drawn on two separate pages... gosh, that was probably more trouble then it was worth)
[edit:] I hope this is the first and last edit for this page. Mostly just added the sloppy tones (I know, but I spent WAY too long on these pages already I NEED to move on) and some text. The text was a dilemma because I wanted it to make sense and be clear, but also spark interest. Most importantly, I wanted it to act as an intro for not just the 'first few chapters' but also the overall scheme of the comic itself. Unfortunately, you won't be hearing too much about the project itself our find out who Audrey is for a long time... The project should be explained a LITTLE in scene 03 I think, but I'm not sure how much I want to reveal so early on :3
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very cool