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©2005-2009 *kitton
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Peony [left] and Beatrice [right] from my comic.

I know there are a lot of errors in the linart, mostly anatomical ones. [like the hands, peas face, so on] I noticed them when I'd sketched it and decided to ink it that way anyway.

The point of this piece, aside from the colour scheme, was to convey something through facial expression, and more importantly body language. I tried to catch the gossopy chattery feel of girls in this piece. It's been pointed out that it looks more like they're just laughing though. I think if I straightened Bree's hand and put it closer to peas ear that might have helped?

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:iconthe-kid36:
thats really cute
:iconenpu2:
Truly amazing!

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:iconkawaiiyume:
aww! its adorable! i love the octi purse so much >.< the colors are awesome too x.x~~ myaa.
:iconc-force:
I wonder what they're whisperin' about... *takes out a satellite tool and listens in*

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:iconnekoaioshi:
I love their clothes ^__^

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:iconharmonic-dimensia:
The colouring is very neat! I agree with what you said; Beatrice's hand looks a bit odd. Nevertheless, I get an "annoying gossiping grade 7's again...*grumble*" feel out the piece. Good work, though I can't say it elicits nice feelings...but feelings, most certainly...*vein throbs*
:iconrufles:
The coloring, as always, is suberb. I agree, the hand and the arm on Beatrice does look a little odd but maybe it was ment to be.
Still, it is a good piece of work. Niiiice!=)
:icontrickshot:
wow that's superb work kitton.. I kinda wish I could draw :(

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"After all is said and done.. a hell of a lot more is said than done."
:icontio-cao:
Indeed, it have mistakes. But they look just the way you wanted. I agree that they really look like gossiping, so it's fine. By the way, how do you coloured it?

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:iconsaccirine:
the poses are great i think it looks like theyre whispering i really like the colors you used so nice an summery an peonys hair is so cute love it:love:

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