preliminary design: jellyfish

OK so this is my preliminary sketch for my tattoo that I am going to get! I really would appreciate your feedback on a few things....

So the lower sketch is actually the original sketch. I showed it to some tattoo artists and they were all "lose the flowers! It's apples and oranges!" but I really want to use flowers as a motif to tie my tattoos together... plus, I thought they made it more unique!! So what are your thoughts?

So the upper sketch is actually the second sketch! I think the lines are a bit more solid, the shapes are more sound, and the detail level is more realistic (think I should simplify further?) but the flow isn't as good so I will do a 3rd drawing.

What do you guys think? Feedback highly appreciated!!